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Local asks people to explain the weather in haiku, and the resulting poems are amazing

TRAVERSE CITY — On Thursday morning, David Clayton Warfield wrote on Overheard in Traverse City:

So how are the roads

Out where you are this morning?

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Report in haiku

And, wow, did people love this game. And they were so good, too! We evidently have quite a few poetic souls in Northern Michigan.

For those who need a refresher, a haiku is a poem - originating in Japan - that follows the 5-7-5 format. So line one is 5 syllables long, line two is 7 syllables and line three is 5 syllables.

Here are some of the haikus we spotted that we thought were really good:

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Snowfall cloaks the roads

Hidden traps beneath the white

Wheels search for the path

- By Nathon Lane

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Haven’t been out yet ❄️

It is my birthday today 🎂

Hot coffee is good ☕️

- By Stephanie Steffens

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I got up early

It’s as crappy as can be

In old Williamsburg

- By Rob Ford

Winter weather is here.

Jack Frost is upset.

Hibernate until July.

- By Christina Lynn Langley-Heater

Snowstorm rages on,

“You’re muted,” they say again—

Remote life goes on.

- By Beth Ann Sellers

I am still in bed

My sons school is closed for today

I’m going back to sleep

- Samantha Wicoff


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